Now the craziness starts...I have the new cover of my Vespian Way series. I also have a pen name - Bethany Drake. I have enough trouble writing on this blog so I'm not sure if I'll create a new one, but I'll keep you posted as I get caught up on everything...I am seeing the light at the end of the tunnel...
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Okay so it looks like I fell off the planet. Promise - I'm still here. The last four years have been ... hard. There's no other word for it. Everything is fine. I'm fine, but I've been the caregiver of my mom who has Dementia. Between her needs, work, etc I seem to have lost control of my time. I am still writing and am trying hard to get back to my blog.
In case you weren't aware Phaze and HSWF which where under the Mundania Umbrella have closed. I was smart enough to get my titles back before all this happened. I'm happy to say the three books I sold to HSWF have been picked up by Melange Books and are available through their Satin Books imprint. I have even sold a new title to them called Magical Quest due out in 2022
I have also been lucky enough to find a publisher for my Vespian Way series. I'm now with Blushing Books under the name of Bethany Drake. I have five titles out with them right now and am close to submitting two more. There's Desire's Destiny, Desire's Duty and Desire's Promise. Then there is two in my werewolf series, Tears of the Queen and Legend of the Tears. I have just finished the rough draft of the third book in the series and have plans for a fourth one the moment I submit it.
I'll probably still be sporadic here on the blog. Unless I win the lottery and can hire someone to help me I can't avoid it, but know I'm still here still working hard in the background and am hoping to do better at keeping my blog alive.
Barb:)
Showing posts with label SF/Futuristic romance. Show all posts
Showing posts with label SF/Futuristic romance. Show all posts
Thursday, October 11, 2018
Thursday, September 20, 2018
New Release info!
I'm excited to say that I have a lot of news to tell you.
First, as I told you guys a while ago I pulled all my books from Phaze.
Satin Romance, and imprint of Melange Books has accepted three of my titles.
A Portrait in Time is available for prerelease now with the full release on September 25th. I'll post links as soon as I have them.
Here's the cover!
Love on the Run, the sequel to A Portrait in Time, will be available between mid-October and beginning of November. I have the cover now.
A Quest for Love will be released as well and I'll post the cover as soon as I get it.
In other exciting news I have found a home for my Desire series. Blushing Books has accepted the first two books and I'm getting ready to send in the next two.
They have also accepted a new manuscript called the Tears of the Queen.
Barb:)
First, as I told you guys a while ago I pulled all my books from Phaze.
Satin Romance, and imprint of Melange Books has accepted three of my titles.
A Portrait in Time is available for prerelease now with the full release on September 25th. I'll post links as soon as I have them.
Here's the cover!
Love on the Run, the sequel to A Portrait in Time, will be available between mid-October and beginning of November. I have the cover now.
A Quest for Love will be released as well and I'll post the cover as soon as I get it.
In other exciting news I have found a home for my Desire series. Blushing Books has accepted the first two books and I'm getting ready to send in the next two.
They have also accepted a new manuscript called the Tears of the Queen.
Barb:)
Thursday, October 5, 2017
What Happened to Barbara Donlon Bradley part 2
So when I stopped writing I worried I wouldn't go back to it. I had finished with the first draft of my tenth book in the Vespian Way series. Normally I do take a break between books, but it's only a few days before I'm right back at it. With this break it was months. Like I said part of it was morning for the loss of my mother-in-law. It got really hard on us toward the end, and I used writing to escape. Suddenly I didn't have the stress that pushed me to write.
I also haven't been feeling the warm fuzzies from my publisher recently. The sales just haven't been there and it's not from lack of advertising. I've decided to pull my titles. Now my questions are what do I do with them. Should I go the route of self publishing? Should I try to find another publisher? This are big questions and the reason I think I stopped writing. I don't know what to do.
I have no idea on how to self publish, how to find covers, getting ISBN numbers. It's all a bit daunting. So is finding a new publisher. Having to submit this books through another editing process isn't easy. What if the editor doesn't like my writing style?
I'd love to hear from you guys to see what you suggest.
I also haven't been feeling the warm fuzzies from my publisher recently. The sales just haven't been there and it's not from lack of advertising. I've decided to pull my titles. Now my questions are what do I do with them. Should I go the route of self publishing? Should I try to find another publisher? This are big questions and the reason I think I stopped writing. I don't know what to do.
I have no idea on how to self publish, how to find covers, getting ISBN numbers. It's all a bit daunting. So is finding a new publisher. Having to submit this books through another editing process isn't easy. What if the editor doesn't like my writing style?
I'd love to hear from you guys to see what you suggest.
Saturday, January 7, 2017
Welcome Rosalie Redd! @RosalieRedd
I want to welcome Rosalie
Redd to my blog. First I’d love you to introduce yourself.
Thanks, Barbara, for inviting me on your blog. A little
about myself, I live in Oregon, where rain is just another excuse to keep
writing. When not at my computer, you can find me at Jazzercise, waterfall
collecting in the Pacific Northwest, or relaxing with my hubby and our pesky
cat, Snookums.
Tell us about your
latest release.
My latest release is Unimaginable
Lover, book 3 in my Warriors of
Lemuria series. It’s a continuation of the war over Earth’s water, but this
time, Council Leader Tanen takes on a solo mission to bring a traitor to
justice. Mortally wounded during the hunt, he’s rescued by an enchanting female
who nurses him back to health. Despite the passion that burns between them,
she’s human…and therefore, forbidden.
Now I have a few
questions for you – I have found readers do like to know fun things about us
writers.
1.) Who is your
favorite villain – it can be from a book (even one of yours), movie or TV show.
And why?
My favorite villain would have to be Dr. Hannibal Lecter
from Silence of the Lambs. He’s evil to the core, yet sadistically enthralling.
You can’t help but get sucked into his penetrating eyes and smooth tone. It
doesn’t get much creepier than that.
2.) Who is your
favorite character out of your books? Why?
My favorite character from my books would have to be Ram.
He’s the antagonist in Untouchable Lover
(book 1) and Untamable Lover (book
2). I have a soft spot for broken heroes and downtrodden antagonists. There’s
just something about a bad guy who still pines for his lost love. Despite that
he’s bound to serve his god, Zedron, and fight in the war, what he longs for
more than anything is to reunite with his ex-wife.
3.) What genre do you
write? What made you pick that one?
I write paranormal romance and a little science fiction
romance. Growing up, my father introduced me to many of the classics in science
fiction, fantasy, and horror from Tolkien to Frank Herbert to Poe. I was
fascinated with anything otherworldly and loved to see the characters grow and
develop throughout the stories. My mother introduced me to soap operas and it
wasn’t until I read my first paranormal romance did I fall in love with the
genre. It blended my fascination of otherworldly creatures with my love of
romance. I was hooked from then on.
4.) What are you
working on now?
I’m currently working on Undeniable Lover, book 4 in my series. This one features Saar, the
Commander of Arms, and a male with a hardened heart.
5.) What got you to
start writing?
Characters and stories started floating around in my head
several years ago. Finally, I began to listen and started writing down what
they were telling me. Soon, I had a good rough draft for Untouchable Lover and never looked back.
6.) Where do you get
your ideas from?
That’s a tough one. Sometimes the ideas come from an odd
comment I might hear in the grocery store checkout line or from a clip on the
news, but most of the time, something pops into my head, and I think…hmmm…what
if?
7.) What would people
who read your work be surprised to find out about you?
Hmmm… A while back I competed in a Dance Dance Revolution
gaming competition and actually made it to the second round. I have some pretty
slick dance moves. LOL!
8.) Do you have any
special talents?
I can read upside down and backwards.
9.) What was the one
piece of advice you received when you were an aspiring author that has stuck
with you? Why?
Don’t give up. Tenacity and a positive attitude can work
wonders.
10.) If you could talk
to any famous figure (present, past or fictional) who would it be and what
would you talk about?
I’d like to talk to the aliens that visited Earth long ago.
I’d want to know what planet they came from and why they created us. Yep, I’m
an ancient alien theorist.
11.) What song would
you say describes your life?
Journey’s Don’t Stop
Believin’!
12.) If you could come
back as any animal – what would it be?
Hands down, a cat. Pet me, pet me, pet me…
Social Media Links:
Twitter: https://twitter.com/RosalieRedd
Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.com/rosalieredd/
Amazon author page: https://www.amazon.com/author/rosalieredd
Buy Links:
Amazon US: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B01N7K0PCU
Amazon AU: https://www.amazon.com.au/dp/B01N7K0PCU
Amazon UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B01N7K0PCU
Amazon CA: https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B01N7K0PCU
Excerpt from Unimaginable Lover:
Mauree’s naked skin glistened in the moonlight. She stood at
the base of the waterfall, sluicing water away from her face and through her
beautiful blonde hair. Her full breasts bobbed as she moved, her nipples peaked
from the cold water. His gaze tracked to her narrow waist, over her
well-rounded hips and down her perfect legs. Not long ago he’d have paid any
price to see her bare flesh. Now, she was nothing but a traitor.
Her shower complete, Mauree headed for the shore. She
squeezed water from her shoulder-length hair and picked up her ragged clothes.
“Tanen, you can come out now. No need to hide.”
Craya! His heartburn flared to life, and he swallowed the bitter taste in his
mouth. Inside his coat’s front pocket, he gripped the cool, rough surface of
the sacred blue sunstone. The tension in his shoulders eased, if only for a
moment.
For weeks he’d searched the ancient scriptures for the
unusual punishment of treason. The pressure had gotten the better of him, and
he’d given in to his kleptomania, stealing the magical blue sunstone from the
Throne room. He’d eventually found the right text outlining the death sentence.
On the way to deliver the news, he’d discovered Mauree’s empty cell. He
couldn’t face his king on either count and had pursued the traitor on his own.
A low, bell-like laugh echoed from the water’s edge. “Come
now, Tanen. Did you really think I didn’t know you trailed me? It’s about time
we talked, don’t you think?”
He adjusted his collar and traced his fingers over his lapel
pin. The engraved symbol stood for Lemuria or “Mu” and was his most precious
adornment, signifying his status as council leader. He gritted his teeth and
stepped into the open. “There’s nothing to say. For assisting the Gossum, our
dark enemy, and for attempting to kill the queen and her unborn child,
I’m taking you back to the Keep to—”
“…face the
death sentence? You’re not as smart as I thought you were.”
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Saturday, December 3, 2016
Meet the Author's of Baby It's Cold in Space!
Hi All,
My guests this
week are all part of a new anthology. One I’m sure you’re going to enjoy. I
have asked each author to let us know which story is theirs in Baby it’s Cold in
Space and asked them to
answer the following questions.
1.) How did you come up with the story in this anthology?
2.) Do you normally write SF? If not what is your normal genre?
And I asked one to
answer this one.
3.) How did you come up with the idea for the anthology? (only 1
person needs to answer this question)
First up is Donna:
Donna S. Frelick, Saturday Night in Devils Holler
1.) There are several threads woven into this story: First, the
premise of my Interstellar Rescue universe which is that aliens are stealing
humans for slaves and an intergalactic abolition organization exists to rescue
and return those who have been Taken. Second, my own family connection to the
mountains of West Virginia. And, third, of course, the idea of romance, which
is strong in all my stories.
2.) Yes, I’m a science fiction romance gal all the way! I started
out writing STAR TREK fan fiction to give Jim Kirk an outlet for all his
romantic inclinations!
Next is Rosalie:
Rosalie Redd, Angelo 13
1.) When I saw the title of the
anthology, Baby, It’s Cold in Space
an image of a capsule floating through space with a lone survivor popped into
my mind. The story morphed to become one
about discovering emotions, love in particular. Of course, the dashing hero
needed to meet up with a strong heroine that shows him the true meaning of
love.
2.) My stories tend to be a blend
of fantasy, science fiction, and paranormal romance. Angelo 13 is my first foray into the traditional science fiction
romance genre and it was so much fun to write! More stories are churning, eager
to get on the page.
Now meet Selene:
Selene Grace Silver, Light
Up the Dark
1.) The vision of a young woman,
trapped, naked, completely vulnerable--except for her wits and intelligence--in
a dark space cell, just appeared in my mind. I wanted to know who she was and
how she’d ended up in such a dangerous situation. I had been fiddling with the
story for over a year and thought this joint project might be the venue for it.
2.) I have been writing SFR for
several years, but this will be my first published story in this genre. I have
several other stories from this same universe and the first full length novel
is coming out at the start of 2017. I also write contemporary romance and
paranormal romance.
3.) Actually, the anthology was
proposed by another writer on the RWA’s Fantasy, Futuristic and Paranormal
forums. She left the project early on, but eight of us hung with it and
followed through on the idea. We loved the title. It’s been a great experience
to work with each other and we’ve even created a website in hope of pursuing
another joint project. Check us out at sfrshootingstars.com.
And Blaire Edens:
Blaire Edens, The Climate of Love
1.) My husband and son are amateur
astronomers. When I heard them discussing a planet, similar to Earth, that
*could* be reachable in few decades or a century, I began to wonder what we
could learn from the beings that might live on that planet. Around the same time,
I binged Ancient Aliens and somehow the two ideas merged in my head and I
wondered if it was possible that nearby planets were populated by our ancient
ancestors. I added the element of climate change because, as a woman with
degrees in environmental sciences, it’s a real concern for me.
2.) I’ve been writing paranormal
romance and contemporary romance for several publishers for several years. This
is my first true Sci-Fi romance but most of my books have a strong science
element because I’m a Smithsonian and Nat Geo JUNKIE!
Plus Jayne Fury:
Jayne Fury, Still Life
1.) When we decided on the name, Baby, It’s Cold In Space, my first
thought was to explore my own feelings about the winter holiday season such as
light in the darkness, hope, and new birth. From there, the story about a
terraforming astrobiologist’s project as the target for a celestial terrorist
began to flow. Add in one inquisitive robot and bam! This was a perfect fit for
my Solar Flame series about “bodice ripping ninjas in space” romance + pulp.
2.) I’m new to the author game and
SciFiRom is my current jam. I began writing SciFi fanfic in the Star Trek
community and just recently broadened my horizons to create my own universe.
I’m staying with SFR because the authors I’ve met have been supportive and truly
inspirational. It’s a growing genre and I love it.
My last Guest is Diana Rivis:
Diana
Rivis, Star Gazers
1.)
I was being a television couch potato one day a while back and happened upon a
documentary about parallel universes and the possibility that they exist. It was the first time I’d ever seen the
concept analyzed from a scientific point of view by legitimate scientists. It was also the first time I’d ever heard the
term, multiverse. I was completely gob
smacked! I started to think about the
possibilities of jumping from one universe to the next. What would we find? Would there be planets like ours? If so, would they be populated by beings like
us? A story and characters started to
form in my mind and I just HAD to write it.
2.)
I’ve always loved science fiction, so that’s what I write the most often. In fact, Star
Gazers is the first of what will eventually be a three-book series. I also write some paranormal and have a
series of baby dragon short stories.
Wednesday, October 12, 2016
100,000 hits! @barbbradley
I'm doing the happy dance! I hit a mile marker and I couldn't do it without you guys! I hit 100,000 hits on my blog! I wanted to do something special for this and have racked my brain.
I've had this idea in my head and have thought about writing it out so here is a free read as my thank you...Note I've been working on this for a few weeks and realize that I'll never load it if I try to write the whole thing at once so I'm going to load it in snippets and create a page for the completed story.
I opened my eyes and found myself in a white room. What the hell happened? Was I in a car accident? Pushing myself into a seated position I looked around. Never saw a doctor's office or hospital like this before.
Just as I sat up a man walked in. Damn he was cute. Chiseled features, beautiful brown hair and I could see he was well built under the white outfit he wore. He had romance hero written all over him. I wasn't sure of his age but I'd guess early thirties. He smiled and I had to smile back. He had one of those smiles I wrote about. The one that would melt any heroine's heart.
"How are you doing?" He came over to the bed and pressed his fingers against a glass wall behind me.
"Um, fine, but can you tell me where I am?" I watched as data popped up on the glass. It was a computer. Hmm. Something I should work into my futuristic books.
"Sure, you're in my medlab." He stepped back, but kept an eye on whatever was streaming on the screen behind me.
Medlab? I use that word in my futuristics. Especially the series I've been working on. Am I dreaming a very lucid dream? It felt too feel to be a dream. I could see people moving out in a corridor beyond the glass wall sealing us in. There were other patients in the room with me. Dreams normally don't go into that much detail. Did they? Mine didn't. At least I didn't think so. But what else could it be?
I looked at my doctor and noticed his eyes for the first time. How I missed them before this I didn't know. I saw gold eyes with a violet ring. It couldn't be... "Dr..."
"Just call me Kuarto."
Hopefully more next week...
I've had this idea in my head and have thought about writing it out so here is a free read as my thank you...Note I've been working on this for a few weeks and realize that I'll never load it if I try to write the whole thing at once so I'm going to load it in snippets and create a page for the completed story.
I opened my eyes and found myself in a white room. What the hell happened? Was I in a car accident? Pushing myself into a seated position I looked around. Never saw a doctor's office or hospital like this before.
Just as I sat up a man walked in. Damn he was cute. Chiseled features, beautiful brown hair and I could see he was well built under the white outfit he wore. He had romance hero written all over him. I wasn't sure of his age but I'd guess early thirties. He smiled and I had to smile back. He had one of those smiles I wrote about. The one that would melt any heroine's heart.
"How are you doing?" He came over to the bed and pressed his fingers against a glass wall behind me.
"Um, fine, but can you tell me where I am?" I watched as data popped up on the glass. It was a computer. Hmm. Something I should work into my futuristic books.
"Sure, you're in my medlab." He stepped back, but kept an eye on whatever was streaming on the screen behind me.
Medlab? I use that word in my futuristics. Especially the series I've been working on. Am I dreaming a very lucid dream? It felt too feel to be a dream. I could see people moving out in a corridor beyond the glass wall sealing us in. There were other patients in the room with me. Dreams normally don't go into that much detail. Did they? Mine didn't. At least I didn't think so. But what else could it be?
I looked at my doctor and noticed his eyes for the first time. How I missed them before this I didn't know. I saw gold eyes with a violet ring. It couldn't be... "Dr..."
"Just call me Kuarto."
Hopefully more next week...
Wednesday, July 27, 2016
Writing Down the Bones: Ten Things You Should Know about Editors Part 2 @barbbradley
Here's the second installment of Ten Things You Need to Know about Editors (Whether You're Published or Not) Written by Paula Ekyelhof. I know, I know, I should have posed this a while ago. Sorry it took so long.
As usual I'm going to try to put them in my own words.
6.) Editors care about their authors and there books. Now this is written for the brick and mortar houses where the editor can push your book for you. In the electronic world your book is edited by your editor from their home. There is no fighting for shelf space so each book is treated equally.
7.) This is your book not the editors and we want to keep it that way. It's not our job to rewrite your book the way we would do it but the way we think you should do it.
8.) We want your book to sell as much as you do. Understand that your editor, cover artist, anyone involved in your book gets royalties just like you do. If it doesn't sell we don't get paid.
9.) We can each you a lot. A good editor can help you sharpen your writing. We catch those things that you can't see notice patterns you might not.No matter how seasoned you are always eep an open mind and be willing to learn.
10.) As an editor I'm always hoping your book is the next great book. The one that takes readers by storm. The one that you can't put down. The one that makes me forget to edit because I'm so caught up in the story I forget to do it.
Publishing is hard of the author as well as the editor. It can be harsh, and a bit cruel but we're all an optimistic bunch.
As usual I'm going to try to put them in my own words.
6.) Editors care about their authors and there books. Now this is written for the brick and mortar houses where the editor can push your book for you. In the electronic world your book is edited by your editor from their home. There is no fighting for shelf space so each book is treated equally.
7.) This is your book not the editors and we want to keep it that way. It's not our job to rewrite your book the way we would do it but the way we think you should do it.
8.) We want your book to sell as much as you do. Understand that your editor, cover artist, anyone involved in your book gets royalties just like you do. If it doesn't sell we don't get paid.
9.) We can each you a lot. A good editor can help you sharpen your writing. We catch those things that you can't see notice patterns you might not.No matter how seasoned you are always eep an open mind and be willing to learn.
10.) As an editor I'm always hoping your book is the next great book. The one that takes readers by storm. The one that you can't put down. The one that makes me forget to edit because I'm so caught up in the story I forget to do it.
Publishing is hard of the author as well as the editor. It can be harsh, and a bit cruel but we're all an optimistic bunch.
Saturday, June 18, 2016
Please Welcome my Latest Guest Jean Lamb!
I want to welcome Jean
Lamb! First I’d love you to introduce yourself.
Tell us about your
latest release.
Phoenix in Shadow is
a large fantasy novel with a romance at the heart of it, though many of the
branches go off in other directions. It is also the first of a series about the
same fantasy world. Lady Idabel is a young woman with strong ambitions of her
own, most of which have to do with revenge against the evil forces that
destroyed her family, and the city that they once ruled. She has been raised in
the Temple in Anyakora, and its leader is using her as a weapon, though she
doesn’t really mind. Lord Treasurer Fennoy seeks her hand—but is he really the
right man for her? Or should she vow herself to the Maiden, as the
Priestess-Mother would like?
Then there’s Tar-Kapel Demytry, who knows he must marry, but
hides a sad secret that keeps him from trying. He desires women, especially the
tempting Lady Ardry—but fears he cannot have children. Who can heal his heart
and release him from this curse? His friends include the aging spymaster Afac
Stellin, who protected Demytry when he was a child from his ill-tempered
father, and Dar Wolfraven, Demytry’s sword-brother and truest friend.
Demytry and Idabel must find each other in a world full of
betrayal, the evil forces from the south who will do anything to keep them
apart, and finally, love. There seem to be times, though, when even love might
not be enough. They must find the courage to be honest with each other, and to
survive the worst that life can deal to them.
This world, unfortunately, is full of graphic and sometimes
sexual violence, and there are times when the reader might wonder if those who
are guilty of it will receive their just deserts. Still, there is also hope,
atonement…and always, there is love.
Now I have a few
questions for you – I have found readers do like to know fun things about us
writers.
1.) Who is your
favorite villain – it can be from a book (even one of yours), movie or TV show.
And why?
The Penguin on Gotham is a very bad person and I should not
like him. And yet, I do. He manages without any special superpowers except his
mind and tongue, I am perpetually amazed that someone hasn’t managed to kill him
yet. The first time I saw him, I was, “OMG, that’s Tom Riddle’s weird American
cousin!” He has a hit or miss record on manipulating people, but even with that
really strange psychiatrist doing his best to break Mr. Cobblepot, under
extreme stress he bounced back. Ok, it was in a really creepy Norman Bates way
of bouncing back, and I’m sure Fish Mooney really, really wants to talk to him
again, but I can’t look away when he’s on screen.
2.) Who is your favorite
character out of your books? Why?
Tonio Vitor, from Dead
Man’s Hand. He begins as a typical somewhat spoiled brat (I think of him as
Tony Stark’s younger, crazier brother) and then I put him through hell, from
which he emerges as Ravin Gambrell, aka the Ghost. He was really fun to write,
because even though he’s scarred up rather badly, he still does so many things
competently (he’s way better at gambling than I am, just to name one). He’s
sociable, highly emotional, doesn’t mind if he’s down on his luck or back up
again, and can sail the Inner Sea all he wants. If only he could stop seeing
ghosts. Or having people interested in that ability.
3.) What do genre do
you write? What made you pick that one?
I write in several genres. So far, the only published ones
on Amazon are romance and fantasy, but I have several books planned in other
ones. I read very widely, and have 30 books planned, including a mystery
series, an SF series or two, and even a Western saga series moderately planned
out. The three fantasy books up now (Dead
Man’s Hand, Hatchling, and Phoenix
in Shadow) are all the beginning of their own separate series. Keeping
track of everyone’s ages and other personal data as they age—well, that’s what
spreadsheets are for, and I’m not joking. I worked a lot with spreadsheets in
the past couple of decades, and they are your friend!
4.) What are you
working on now?
It’s called The Dragon’s
Pearl, and it’s the sequel to Hatchling.
I already have a version of it done in Crappy First Draft, and will spend the
next few months revising it. I take my young hero Tameron dayn Sidian, and dump
him in a new land where he doesn’t know the language. Just for fun, he picks up
a local children’s disease, only a lot harder, because he’s not acquainted with
the local microbes. That keeps him in one place long enough to pick some of the
language he needs to know, and that delay complicates his life in other ways,
as well.
As a treat for making my daily quota of words for revising,
I allow myself Candy Crush, or to play with a little fanfiction—I write Harry
Potter fanfiction under the name of excessivelyperky on Fanfiction.net. Note:
my husband is a chemistry teacher, so just *guess* who my favorite character
is. I have both short stories and a really long one on that site.
5.) What got you to
start writing?
I have always made up stories since I was a child. I just
like getting paid for them now <G>. I began working on a story in the
universe where Phoenix in Shadow
takes place back in the 1980’s, because it was something to do that wasn’t
school or babies when I was using the GI Bill to learn accounting. I became
active in the National Fantasy Fan Federation back then, and also joined an
Amateur Press Association (APA) called Imaginapa, and that was a lot of fun. I
attended several SF conventions and knew I wanted to be one of the writers up
at the front of the room sitting on a panel. The print publishing world has
become ever more interesting as time went by, and I thought I would rather
publish my books independently rather than spend a decade or so trying to
submit them to print publishers (Baen Books, one of the few SF places that
looks at work without an agent, once took a year and a half to look at and
return an earlier version of Hatcling).
So instead of playing agent roulette, I went the Amazon route, and have had
both low and fairly decent sales (some people will buy anything with a dragon
on the cover, God bless them!).
6.) Where do you get your
ideas from?
I get free movies in my head of stuff that hasn’t happened
yet. Sometimes I run scenes from more than one character’s point of view, so
when I switch to that character, they already have an opinion of what happened
to someone else. I could so write holo-novels!
7.) What would people
who read your work be surprised to find out about you?
That I once learned how to do a barrel roll in a T-38. See,
I was in Air Force ROTC, and as a cadet went on four weeks of field training
(which is basically boot camp for officer wannabes). Part of that training
involved going down to Webb AFB (no longer with us, think the cockroaches
finally took over) and getting to sit the in the back seat of a T-38, a
training jet, and seeing how well our stomachs held up to Fun Flight Maneuvers.
Fortunately, mine was just fine, so I got to learn a few things, and even got a
little bit of simulator time to play Take Off and Landing Without Crashing.
Alas, I was two inches too short for navigator school (this was back in the old
sextant days, and for some reason people had objections to me becoming a flying
nunchuck during turbulence. Hey, I *said* I’d wear heels…). So I spent four
years in the Air Force flying a desk and having the NCOs wonder if I was really
old enough to be out of school yet. But flying is just way cool.
8.) Do you have any
special talents?
I can mimic voices, and when someone speaks or talks, I can
feel in my throat and mouth where and how they are speaking or singing. Also, I
love to dance, and it’s very easy for me to choreograph any kind of music. I
once won an Undanceable Music dancing contest at a science fiction convention,
because if there is sound, I can move to it. Music just feels nice inside me.
9.) What was the one
piece of advice you received when you were an aspiring author that has stuck
with you? Why?
(uses high-pitched Thermian voice from Galaxy Quest: “Never
give up! Never surrender!”)
Seriously, no writer really knows what is going to hit and
what isn’t, so you may as well write what you want to write and hope for the
best. And always do your best, no matter how horrible that one writer you know
who is making bazillions out of his or her last book even though it patently
sucks royal as far as you can tell. Your voice can only come through more
clearly if you take the time to do it right, and I think we all know what that
really means (although, if after the last rewrite you hate the characters and
want them to all die, you are better off going on to Warcraft and whacking some
orcs before going back to the manuscript). A book is worth the extra work it
takes to make it good.
10.) If you could talk
to any famous figure (present, past or fictional) who would it be and what
would you talk about?
I would love to talk to Oprah Winfrey, because establishing
a career is still different for women than it is for men, most of the time. She
struggled with an early family life that was quite unpleasant, and still
managed to create a wonderful life for herself (also, she struggles with her
weight, too, so we could pass each other dieting and exercise tips). Seriously,
she overcame some huge hardships to become the woman she is today, and I would
love to find out how she set priorities when, at time, they were set for her by
others.
11.) What song would
you say describes your life?
Rhapsody in Blue, by Gershwin—it has quiet moments, loud
moments, sentimental moments, jazzy moments—it contains an awful lot in just
16-18 minutes (depends on the version how long it is, there’s quite a lot of
improvisation there which also describes my life pretty well).
12.) If you could come
back as any animal – what would it be?
A swan. Though awkward-looking as hatchlings, they grow into
grace and beauty. Plus, those wings and beak are wicked strong. I live near a
very large lake, and a friend of mine lives where she has the lake in her back
yard. She can’t have picnics because the local swans come up into her yard and
demand to be fed. Ok, perhaps I’ve revealed too much about swans…but I still
like them anyway.
Excerpt:
Idabel never forgot the horror of the burning city.
Cleophis
once sat peacefully in the mountains at the southern edge of the Phoenix Empire
and overlooked the passes to the land of the enemy. Dar Nidas Idarlo and his
Lady Consort Denali ruled the city and the territory surrounding it. Idabel had
been a child then. She was excited when her oldest sister Minshall was
betrothed to Tar-Kapel Demytry, even though Minshall herself was less
enthusiastic.
That
had been over half her life ago. She was only eight when Cleophis fell to the
armies of General Durchan, leader of the Dramen who lived to the south. Idabel
had been the youngest of seven noisy girls. Now she was alone.
As
she sat inside the Temple in Anyakora, she relived the bumpy wagon ride barely
ahead of the flames consuming her home. Father had wanted to send them away two
weeks ago, and Idabel still remembered the argument she’d overheard.
Father
had been right. Now he fought with his troops to cover their retreat. Idabel
sat in the wagon and saw nothing but the back of her mother’s head. Her sisters
huddled together and moaned in fear, despite Minshall’s attempts to calm them.
Shouting and the sounds of fighting filled the air everywhere around them.
Idabel
was more excited than frightened. Father had let her begin arms training a few
months ago. Shosann, one of her other sisters, showed her some of what she had
learned of weapons when no one else could be spared to teach her once the
Dramen army began their siege. Now they had to run, though Idabel wished they
could stay and fight.
Lady
Idarlo screamed and lashed the horses to greater speed. Idabel didn’t
understand. Mama always told them to be gentle with the beasts. The wagon
lurched forward. All of them shrieked in terror when something hit the wagon,
and a spear point stabbed through the heavy canvas at the side.
Idabel
coughed from the smoke. This couldn’t be real. As if in a dream, the pins fell
out of her mother’s hair, except for one at the top. The long, looped braids
fell. Streaks of white hair winding through black looked like ribbons. Her
mother’s face, usually kind with her olive-skinned, fine-boned beauty, was now
a mask of fury.
The
wagon stopped. Then it moved again. Idabel could tell they were off the road
now. She held her hands over her ears to stop the horrible noise. Wood cracked
and popped as something battered the frame of their cart beyond endurance.
Gigantic green-skinned warriors on horseback seized the reins from her mother,
though Lady Denali struck them with her whip.
Idabel
struggled to move closed to her mother, but Minshall pushed her down beneath a
leather trunk. Why did she do that?
The heavy thing squeezed her, and she found it hard to breathe. She wiggled
first one way, and then the other, to escape the pressure. I only want to help! Why won’t Min let me?
The
wagon stopped. Idabel heard her mother and sisters shouting, and then weeping.
One side of her prison broke wide open, and she slid down to the ground along
with the trunk. Dramen warriors in dusty armor rode by laughing, while others
pushed her family into the dirt. How dare they! What did they mean by taking
turns?
She
finally pushed her way out from under the trunk, scooped up a fallen dagger,
and flew at the enemy with a scream of rage. They paid her no attention till
her blade sank into a soldier’s leg. One sweeping stroke of a spear-butt sent
her flying. The last thing she remembered seeing was a torch being thrown onto
the shattered wagon.
Idabel
never knew how long it was before she opened her eyes again. At first she
didn’t understand why she wasn’t in her room. Everything shimmered and her head
ached dreadfully. Her dress was partly burned, while one of her braids was
charred to a stump. Her face hurt on that side, too.
The
wagon—the wagon was gone. A heap of smoldering embers sat in its place.
Idabel
struggled to her feet and looked for her mother. Mama would know what to do.
The soldiers were gone. She was glad of that.
She
looked at the bodies on the ground without understanding at first. One of them
had a green skirt, though it was now soaked with blood. Shosann always wore
that color.
The
young girl was afraid to look at the faces. It was so quiet.
She
heard someone screaming. She wished they would stop. Then she realized why her
throat hurt. She was the one screaming. She was screaming because the bodies on
the ground were her mother and sisters—one, two, three, four, five, six—that
wasn’t right. She had one mother and six sisters, that should add up to seven
bleeding lumps, not six.
Then
Idabel forced herself to look at the faces, the frozen horrible faces. Minshall
was gone. Just…gone.
She
thought she heard a whisper. Oh, merciful Mother. Mama was still alive.
“Idabel,”
Lady Denali murmured. Her mouth bled. “Look in my hair…under the left braid…”
“Yes,
Mama.” She gently lifted her mother’s head and searched through the filthy,
crusted hair. She found a hard lump the size of a large bean under the braid’s
beginning. She was afraid to yank on it. Her mother had other lumps on her head
now.
“Take
it,” the dying woman said. “It won’t hurt much.”
Idabel
pulled it out, like a small bead sewn into a small cloth bag. She held it
tightly in her hands, because she knew it was the Rose of Cleophis, a flaming
ruby with a tiny flaw in the center like a miniature rose. It had been the talisman
of the Idarlos for centuries. She didn’t understand why Papa didn’t have it
with him, though.
“Take
it to your father,” her mother said. Then the light fled from her eyes. She was
like everyone else on the ground now.
It
was quiet again. Mama had told her what to do. Where was Papa? He’d told them
last night that they were going to Anyakora. Maybe the Tar-Kapel could help—he
had a spymaster who told him everything, her father had said. Maybe he would
know where Papa was. Maybe he could find Minshall, too.
Anyakora
was in the north on the map her tutor had shown her. I want to go home! But she couldn’t. The Rose was her
responsibility till she could give it to Papa. Idabel took a few steps and fell
down. That was silly, she was much too old to trip like a baby. She stood up
and started again.
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for my beautiful cover! She adapted one of her premades to my needs, and I am
delighted with the outcome.
Saturday, March 26, 2016
Welcome my Latest Guest Rebel Miller!@RebelMillerBoox
I want to welcome Rebel
Miller. First I’d love you to introduce yourself.
Hi! I’m a romance author with two books under my belt, Awakening and Promising, both part of my New Adult romance trilogy. I was born in
Jamaica, but have lived in Canada for most of my life. I reside in the
outskirts of Toronto with my two boys and hubby, and am enjoying an
unexpectedly warm winter up here in the North!
Tell us about your
latest release.
Promising is the
second novel in my futuristic New Adult romance trilogy, which tells the story
of Kira Metallurgist, a young woman starting out on her own at the age of
twenty-one. This novel places Kira in even more complex and so challenging
situations, in particular, the love triangle she finds herself in with Gannon
and Tai, navigating the politics around her career ambitions and coming to
terms with her family’s many secrets. Promising
is an angst-filled romance set against a dramatic backdrop that resonates
with readers – whether lovers of stories in contemporary or futuristic settings.
Now I have a few
questions for you – I have found readers do like to know fun things about us
writers.
1.) Who is your
favorite villain – it can be from a book (even one of yours), movie or TV show.
And why?
Ooh. Good question! I love movies as much as I love books,
so let’s start with my movie choice. I adore Joan Crawford played by Faye
Dunaway in the movie Mommie Dearest.
It’s becoming a tradition for my mother and I to watch it with a glass of wine
and a good laugh on Mother’s Day.
As for books, I love Layla Sovereign, one of Kira’s
adversaries in my books Awakening
and Promising. She’s enigmatic,
complicated and unpredictable. I enjoy a villain or adversary who’s unexpected in
every way!
2.) Who is your
favorite character out of your books? Why?
I’m pretty keen on Kira Metallurgist. I guess I would have
to be to write three books focused on her and the challenges she faces! Kira’s
dauntless in her efforts to protect those she loves. Despite her young age,
she’s ambitious, very strong and confident. Growing up, I was always drawn to
girls who thumbed their noses at authority and what others thought about them.
Kira is that type of girlfriend but who still shows those moments of
vulnerability that are expected for someone starting out in a new career and
falling in love.
3.) What do genre do
you write? What made you pick that one?
I write romance, currently in the futuristic setting, but I
plan on writing contemporary as well. I chose romance because that’s what I
have loved reading ever since I was a little girl. (Shh! I stole my mother’s
romance novels and read them in the closet. Don’t tell her!)
I decided to write a futuristic
romance for my first novel and series because I wanted to develop a whole new
world and culture where I could really push the boundaries of a lot of belief
systems and create high-stakes political drama between the main characters and
those around them.
4.) What are you
working on now?
I’m working on the final book in the trilogy. It’s going to
be one where Kira faces all her demons and has to make decisions on what type
of path she wants to take – not only in terms of her love interest, but her
career as well. After that, I’ll head right into writing a standalone
contemporary romance.
5.) What got you to
start writing?
Hmm. I have to say, I always knew that I would write a novel,
but I had assumed that writing would be a career I took on maybe in another ten
years or so. When I considered whether to become a writer in 2014, I had two
kids under the age of seven and was well-underway establishing myself as a
corporate communicator. I couldn’t really envision starting a writing career.
Then it occurred to me that I had always been a writer. As a
communications professional, that’s what you do – write! It’s a different sort
of writing, but the profession flexes your creative skills all the same. I had
an idea for this story bouncing around in my head for months and said to
myself, Why not? Why wait any longer? Write that darn book, Rebel!
I’m so glad I did. I’ve enjoyed every moment of it – even
those moments of panic when I wonder how in the world I’m going to get that
scene out the right way!
6.) Where do you get your
ideas from?
I love the idea of
going against the status quo. The truth is, despite my name, I’m probably one
of the most diplomatic, practical and orderly people you would ever meet, so
the chance to challenge systems and beliefs is very appealing to me, and is a
recurring theme in my writing. In my trilogy, I take on the idea of being able
to love more than one person and the idea of pre-determined social position. I
simply think of what’s considered the mainstream and challenge myself to create
a story that goes against it, but will still resonate with readers today.
7.) What would people
who read your work be surprised to find out about you?
I was a beauty queen contestant in my former life *bashful face*. I won one cultural
competition representing Jamaica and entered another to win Most Photogenic and
Best Talent.
8.) Do you have any
special talents?
I studied modern languages for my undergraduate degree, so I
speak a little (very little!) Japanese, reasonable Spanish and a dash of
French. I can cook a mean Jamaican jerk chicken and will challenge any
do-it-yourself home decorator to
a mosaic tile competition any day of the week ;).
9.) What was the one
piece of advice you received when you were an aspiring author that has stuck
with you? Why?
Don’t over think it. As an author, you delve deep into the
world of your characters and sometimes, for me at least, it’s hard to pull yourself
out and see the bigger picture. I love sub-plot and adding conflict at every
turn. When I get panicky over the tangled web I’m weaving, I tell myself not to overthink
it. That usually means focusing the scene on one particular goal or plot point.
Works like a charm ever time!
10.) If you could talk
to any famous figure (present, past or fictional) who would it be and what
would you talk about?
I have to say, I have a thing for TV writer and producer,
Shonda Rhimes. I would be over the moon if I could sit down to talk to her
about her creative process, her journey to success and advice on next steps in
my writing career.
11.) What song would
you say describes your life?
There are too many to list here! The song totally depends on
the mood I’m in and what’s going on in my life at the moment. I’m feeling
pretty darned good at the moment, so the song that comes to mind is “Happy” by
Pharell.
12.) If you could come
back as any animal – what would it be?
Goodness! Hmm. How about a fox. They’re so stealth, smart
and unexpected!
Promising: Book Two
of Kira’s Story
PROMISING,
the riveting follow-up to AWAKENING by Rebel Miller.
Faced with diverging loyalties —
between those she loves and her responsibility to the Realm — Kira has to make
heartrending and strategic decisions that threaten to jeopardize her future.
As her connection to Tai deepens and
turmoil in the Realm builds, so does Gannon’s frustration at being unable to
call Kira his own.
Worlds at War ... A Heart in Conflict
While the Realm stands defiant amidst
rising unrest, Kira is thrust
into a role that puts her at the forefront
of her system’s governance and law, supporting a landmark position. Following a devastating turn of
events, she turns to
Tai for a shoulder to lean on after making a painful choice to ensure Gannon
fulfils the role he was meant for.
As she becomes
a reluctant - yet inspiring - voice for her caste, Kira learns about one of the
Realm’s most well-kept secrets and how far leadership will go to prevent it
from being revealed. What she doesn’t know is how much the decisions of her past have the power to bring
enemies into her path, threatening to destroy everyone she holds close to her heart.
This novel is for mature audiences (18+) and includes
committed relationships with multiple partners.
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Excerpt
I snorted, but my lips tilted up at the corners nevertheless. “I’m sure the Protectorate has some sort of virtual reality device that could be refashioned just for that purpose,” I offered, rearranging the wool blanket on my lap.
I was curled up in bed, facing my monitor and resting against a pile of pillows. It had become a familiar position over the last few weeks, one from which I would relay the day’s activities during my nightly call with Gannon. Well, it was a nightly call for me. The sun had already risen where Gannon lived, on Dignitas One.
Suddenly, Gannon seemed to be deep in concentration. “No, on second thought, there’s no technology that could ever measure up to the real thing.” He grinned.
I smiled, heat rising to my cheeks.
“There’s the smile I was looking for,” Gannon said, leaning closer to his monitor, and so closer to me.
He was sitting in his office. He had been holding our calls from there more frequently over the last month. From what I could see, his office was a large, well-lit space. A wall of floor-to-ceiling glass ran its expanse directly behind him. Through it, I could see citizens of every caste striding by in obvious haste to get things done, more than likely at Gannon’s bidding. During these nighttime conversations with Gannon, and within the intimate surroundings of my bedroom, it was easy to forget who he was and his status. As chancellor, he surely had, every day, a checklist as long as my arm, filled with tasks.
I frowned as I noted the time. “I should let you go,” I said, sitting up.
“Why?”
I glanced pointedly behind him, fiddling with the thin strap of my top. “Your office looks incredibly busy.”
He blinked then swiveled in his chair to look at the steady stream of people behind him.
“Oh, my support always look like that,” he said, mischief glittering in his clear blue eyes as he turned back to me. “They think it’ll prevent me asking them to do anything else.” He winked, and I laughed, loving his cheekiness.
About Rebel Miller
Rebel Miller is an author who overindulges in Pinot Grigio,
caramel popcorn and an eclectic mix of movies, music and angst-filled romance
novels.
Rebel earned a graduate degree in Communications and Culture
from Ryerson University and an undergraduate degree from the University of the
West Indies.
Rebel lives in the outskirts of Toronto, Canada with her
husband and two sons.
Connect with Rebel
Website: http://rebelmillerbooks.com/
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/rebel.miller/
Twitter: https://twitter.com/rebelmillerboox
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/RebelMillerBoox
Thursday, March 24, 2016
Shameless Promoting: I've been Nominated!!!
Can I squeal a little? I’ve been nominated for the Romance Reviews Readers’ Choice Awards. Hidden Desire and Timeless Desire are both up for the award. Please go vote – here’s the link to Timeless Desire -http://erotic.theromancereviews.com/viewbooks.php?bookid=21063
and the link to Hidden Desire - http://erotic.theromancereviews.com/viewbooks.php?bookid=17286
We're about halfway done and I'm about halfway there. You're vote would really be appreciated.
I need at least 50 votes to make it to the next round.
Thanks,
BarbJ
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Writing Down the Bones - 10 Things you should know about Writers @barbbradley
I found another great handout in my cleaning. There is no name on it (wait I found it as I went through this - Debbie Macomber wrote this gem) and it says that it would be published in a future issue of Writer's Digest. Since the handout is from one of my binders I'm assuming this has already been published.
We're dealing with the 10 things you need to know about writers (Whether published or not).
I'm going to do 5 this week and 5 next week then in two weeks I'll do the other half of the hand out - 10 things you need to know about editors and since I'm both this should be fun.
As usual I'm going to try to put this into my own words. I love each of these by the way.
1.) We writers are neurotic and don't think it's unreasonable to look for hourly updates on the status of our babies (manuscripts). I'm just as bad as my authors - when I'm on the author side I figure out how long it should take them to edit and start haunting my e-mail to see if it's there yet...
2.) We need a source of comfort while waiting to hear on those babies. Whether it is our mom holding our hand or our favorite bottle of alcohol doesn't really matter. Both will do in a pinch.
3.) We are experts at looking busy. When my husband asks I tell him I'm writing...he doesn't need to know it could be on twitter or FB. Hmm, I got a minute to check out Pinterest.
4.) We love it when you show the love - fan mail, happy b-day wishes on FB, a free meal...
5.) Here Debbie talks about gossip and how our creative minds can fill in the blanks - and I want to add this little bit - ANYTHING you tell a writer whether it is gossip or not can and probably will end up in a book. Especially if it's funny.
We're dealing with the 10 things you need to know about writers (Whether published or not).
I'm going to do 5 this week and 5 next week then in two weeks I'll do the other half of the hand out - 10 things you need to know about editors and since I'm both this should be fun.
As usual I'm going to try to put this into my own words. I love each of these by the way.
1.) We writers are neurotic and don't think it's unreasonable to look for hourly updates on the status of our babies (manuscripts). I'm just as bad as my authors - when I'm on the author side I figure out how long it should take them to edit and start haunting my e-mail to see if it's there yet...
2.) We need a source of comfort while waiting to hear on those babies. Whether it is our mom holding our hand or our favorite bottle of alcohol doesn't really matter. Both will do in a pinch.
3.) We are experts at looking busy. When my husband asks I tell him I'm writing...he doesn't need to know it could be on twitter or FB. Hmm, I got a minute to check out Pinterest.
4.) We love it when you show the love - fan mail, happy b-day wishes on FB, a free meal...
5.) Here Debbie talks about gossip and how our creative minds can fill in the blanks - and I want to add this little bit - ANYTHING you tell a writer whether it is gossip or not can and probably will end up in a book. Especially if it's funny.
Friday, February 5, 2016
Writing Updates: My Mind is Never Idle #amwriting
This has been a hectic week. The people renting our house moved out and we're getting to ready for sale. I have been spackling holes and dings, wiping down doors and baseboards. Peeling off stickers they had left on the walls. I ache everywhere. This sedentary body isn't used to all this manual labor.
The one good thing about this busy work it allows my mind to have the freedom to do what it wants. I've written ten books in the Vespian Way with each book pushing at me to write it before I was finished with the one before it. There were times when I was working on three different books in different stages of writing or editing at the same time. This last book though started out of necessity. I knew I needed to write to keep me sane. As I've been working on it I thought maybe I was done with the series for a while and I would have time to work on something else.
Nope.
While I've been working on getting my old house ready for sale I was slapped with an idea.
Now understand I'm one of those authors that doesn't care for a series where the hero and heroine are constantly pulled apart. I don't want to do that with Heather and Storm, but I need to keep it interesting which is why there is always something for them to fight.
We, as authors are told to do the worst thing to our characters. The worst thing I can think of is killing one of them off, but I don't want to do that so what can I do? That's when it hit me. What if I create an environment where it looks like I've killed them off - I know I did that in Stolen Desire but this is different - what if I use one of the computers Heather is searching for to cause her and Storm to fall into a coma? What if I have Heather's mind jump into another person's body? What if Storm wakes up from his coma but Heather doesn't because her mind is in another body and he has to deal with the fact that his mate is not there for him or this war they're fighting?
One little thought will grow into a book. I just need a little more time.
The one good thing about this busy work it allows my mind to have the freedom to do what it wants. I've written ten books in the Vespian Way with each book pushing at me to write it before I was finished with the one before it. There were times when I was working on three different books in different stages of writing or editing at the same time. This last book though started out of necessity. I knew I needed to write to keep me sane. As I've been working on it I thought maybe I was done with the series for a while and I would have time to work on something else.
Nope.
While I've been working on getting my old house ready for sale I was slapped with an idea.
Now understand I'm one of those authors that doesn't care for a series where the hero and heroine are constantly pulled apart. I don't want to do that with Heather and Storm, but I need to keep it interesting which is why there is always something for them to fight.
We, as authors are told to do the worst thing to our characters. The worst thing I can think of is killing one of them off, but I don't want to do that so what can I do? That's when it hit me. What if I create an environment where it looks like I've killed them off - I know I did that in Stolen Desire but this is different - what if I use one of the computers Heather is searching for to cause her and Storm to fall into a coma? What if I have Heather's mind jump into another person's body? What if Storm wakes up from his coma but Heather doesn't because her mind is in another body and he has to deal with the fact that his mate is not there for him or this war they're fighting?
One little thought will grow into a book. I just need a little more time.
Wednesday, January 20, 2016
Writing Down the Bones: Story Construction and Evaluation Pt 15 Sensual and General #editing
Sorry I didn't post this last week - I even had it written up but totally spaced when Tuesday rolled around, This is the last part of this particular handout. I'm going to combine the last two together because there is only a few question in each category. Enjoy.
First we're going to cover the sensual aspect of your book:
1.) Have you used all six senses?
2.) Have you described color, taste, smells, sounds, spatial relationships, mood, humor, deja vu, and tension?
Now we're going to look at the general things you should make sure are there:
1.) Have you shown instead of told?
2.) Have you removed any unnecessary words or phrases?
3.) Have you switched your view points as little as possible?
That's it for this handout. I hope what I posted has helped you.
New handout next week.
First we're going to cover the sensual aspect of your book:
1.) Have you used all six senses?
2.) Have you described color, taste, smells, sounds, spatial relationships, mood, humor, deja vu, and tension?
Now we're going to look at the general things you should make sure are there:
1.) Have you shown instead of told?
2.) Have you removed any unnecessary words or phrases?
3.) Have you switched your view points as little as possible?
That's it for this handout. I hope what I posted has helped you.
New handout next week.
Saturday, January 16, 2016
Welcome My latest Guest Ann Raina! #amwriting
I want to welcome Ann
Raina. First I’d love you to introduce yourself.
I’m way beyond forty and currently I live in Germany with
five cats and a horse (not in the same apartment; he just didn’t fit). I’ve
been writing novels for years and I still love creating plots, finding
characters and putting them together. My muse is always with me. We talk about
ideas and how to get them into a story every week. My creativity wouldn’t be so
fulfilling without her additions, comments and questions, especially about the
logic in plot twists.
Tell us about your
latest release.
This fall three novels will be released, the first one’s The Secretary’s Bodyguard. The story is
about Jazmin, who’s married to the bodyguard of the Secretary of State. On an
official visit to Colombia the secretary and his entourage are attacked by
terrorists and have to flee through the forest, hunted by men out to kill them
all.
Now I have a few
questions for you – I have found readers do like to know fun things about us
writers.
1.) Who is your
favorite villain – it can be from a book (even one of yours), movie or TV show.
And why?
From a movie I’d choose Hans Gruber, portrayed by Alan
Rickman, in Die Hard 1. He’s cynical, bad without remorse and yet in his way so
funny you can laugh. Okay, I’m guilty of liking this movie anyway… In my
opinion the bad guys always get the best roles, the more challenging
performance. If the bad guys are well played they make the good guys look
handsome and well-behaved, but without the edges.
2.) Who is your
favorite character out of your books? Why?
I tend to write one book with a set of characters and then
let go. This time I wrote three novels in a row because Ethan Mahoney and his
wife make such a lovely couple I couldn’t part with them. And, yes, if I come
up with another plot there will be a forth book. He’s dedicated to his wife and
also his job. He’s straightforward and reliable and a wild tiger if anyone
dares getting close to his wife. He has a way to cheer her up and still respect
her. In the second book he’s confronted with a villain he can’t truly beat and
to write that confrontation was a real challenge. I guess, with Ethan I wrote a
character I would very much like to meet. I confess I’m still a girl with
dreams when it comes to that.
3.) What genre do you
write? What made you pick that one?
I write contemporary romance and Science Fiction. I like
SciFi because of the never ending possibilities to create new worlds and
venture onto other planets where our rules don’t apply. But recently the ideas
were more earth-bound. While writing a story that plays here and now I have to
stick to historical facts and it’s very interesting to do research before the
first paragraph is written.
4.) What are you
working on now?
Another SciFi story which I started between book two and
three of the series. Yes, sometimes I can’t get enough. At first I wanted to
take down notes and do nothing else. I tried to focus on the plot I was writing
at that time, but it just didn’t work. The first ten pages were written before
I blinked. Then I tried for discipline and finished book three (A Bodyguard’s Vacation) to return to
the SciFi plot. Right now I’m in the middle somewhere and try to wrap up and
not forget where I was heading. Getting distracted by side plots is one of my
problems…
5.) What got you to
start writing?
I honestly can’t tell. I suppose it was Han Solo. I loved
the character so much I started writing fan fiction when no one knew that word.
All of my early stories were hand-written and only some friends got them for
reading. I stuck with fan fiction for quite a long time, but then made the turn
to my own worlds and own characters.
6.) Where do you get
your ideas from?
Dreams. Taking a shower. Working in the garden. When an idea
hits me I take down notes, play around with it and present it to my muse for
duly dissection. After that brainstorming sets in, decorated with coffee and cookies.
(I understand all FB posts about the essentials of coffee for authors…) If we
can’t get any further on one day we postpone. I take down more notes and the
full plot will take about two or three weeks for creation. Again, every movie I
watch or book I read can become a source for ideas.
7.) What would people
who read your work be surprised to find out about you?
I think I can only write books, which deal with so much
trouble, action, suspense and else because my real life is very orderly. I’m
happy with my life. I can put all these imaginary problems in my books because
my day-to-day life is enjoyable.
8.) Do you have any
special talents?
I’ve learned riding years ago and finally bought a horse, a
chestnut colored gelding. He’s nine years old by now and a very good partner in
the woods. So I spent a lot of time outdoors.
9.) What was the one
piece of advice you received when you were an aspiring author that has stuck
with you? Why?
Know the character and its language. I was told by my
teacher in high school that my writing is nice (okay, at that time), but I lack
the ability to write narrative according to the man’s or woman’s upbringing.
People from different social places talk differently. I try to keep that in
mind every time I create a new character.
10.) If you could talk
to any famous figure (present, past or fictional) who would it be and what
would you talk about?
I would’ve loved to meet Sir Peter Ustinov. He was such an
intelligent man.
11.) What song would
you say describes your life?
Michael Buble’s It’s a Beautiful Day.
12.) If you could come
back as any animal – what would it be?
I prefer to be a cat in a large home. Maybe a writer’s cat.
Mine tend to look intently at the screen and I guess they were critics in their
first lives…
Excerpt:
“You would’ve slapped him?” His voice tripped over the last word. Ethan tried to imagine his wife hitting Walter Coleman, the incarnation of a strict, very conservative and always serious chief of security. It was funny. Reconsidering that she had brought down Ryan, the image lost some of its entertainment value. He frowned as he watched her very nice butt on a westbound trail that only she saw. There was that little idea in the back of his head he’d better ignore.
“He insinuated I might be in a setup with the terrorists following us. It’s completely stupid, I know, but that’s the way he thinks.” She stopped on the way up and turned until Ethan reached her. Her frown was deep and she looked tired. “He’s doing his job, and he was right to remind you to do yours. We’re not here because of some weekend trip gone wonky. You have to work and probably risk your life saving the secretary.”
He put his hands on her hips. “Princess, can you imagine that I’d put his life over yours? It’s not gonna happen. I’m very proud that you’re so brave. So tough. It might come out all wrong, but it’s not. I didn’t expect you to be like this. Not even with the police training and all.”
“I panic on the inside, Ethan.” She caressed his stubbly cheek and ran her thumb over the cleft in his chin. He saw her fight off emotions that would lead to tears. “I’m so afraid you’ll get hurt. And that those men will catch up to us and kill us all in cold blood. I can’t stand the thought that you’ll throw yourself in the line of fire and that those bastards might finally end what they began.” She combed his hair with her fingers. “I can’t think of a life without you.”
“I’ll work hard so no one gets killed. Would that be okay?”
She trembled as he took her in his arms. “They’re still coming after us, and they’ve got the larger firepower, don’t they? Please, Ethan, tell me that we stand a chance.”
He let go and smiled at her. “Well, we’ve got you with us. And if I got the secretary right, he’ll hire you as recruitment. Wait an hour and he’ll order Walter to hand you a gun.”
She turned and walked on. “I can fire a gun. I was a police officer.”
Ethan, his eyes already back on her derrière, opened his mouth for a reply, rethought the argument and kept silent until she turned with a frown.
“Do you doubt I can shoot?”
Again, Ethan knew he was in trouble, no matter how he answered the question. “Walter…won’t hand a weapon to anyone he hasn’t personally trained. He’s…nuts when it comes to weapons and shooting. He wouldn’t let you touch—”
“He’d reject my help even if Ryan can’t shoot anymore?”
Ethan heard the outrage in her voice and called himself stupid to have brought up the subject. His mind juggled the possible ways to end the discussion. “Ryan’s fine, even with his left hand. I saw him train.”
Book information:
The Secretary’s Bodyguard
Copyright © 2015 Ann Raina
ISBN: 978-1-4874-0518-2
Cover art by Carmen Waters
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