tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2919402264816783689.post3935199658320463196..comments2023-07-26T03:57:54.242-04:00Comments on There's all this stuff in my head...: Writing Down the Bones: Mixing it up with Sentence StructureBarbara Donlon Bradleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04736670279161854416noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2919402264816783689.post-34890636598822402122013-06-30T21:53:30.536-04:002013-06-30T21:53:30.536-04:00I always fall prey to the she/he issue and writing...I always fall prey to the she/he issue and writing very long sentences. Need to keep visiting you! ;)Jasbir Kaur Dalip (Beeray)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02881186343907918846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2919402264816783689.post-77168466916388426692013-06-28T19:13:53.513-04:002013-06-28T19:13:53.513-04:00I like your point about not fixing the words as yo...I like your point about not fixing the words as you go on the first draft.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.com